Ok the guy's voice sucks but everything in the background sounds nice. Whoever is singing to the rest of the song could improve, but otherwise well done.
Ok the guy's voice sucks but everything in the background sounds nice. Whoever is singing to the rest of the song could improve, but otherwise well done.
appreciate the feedback
Mer. Not bad.
1/2 of these stars are for the bass lol. REALLLLL SMOOOOTH
nice
Wtf is this shit?
...asshole.
No.
Just.
No.
Make music, not noise.
I'm thoroughly amazed with this. I can't say why but I like how it keeps a good beat like an 8-bit video game electronica song, yet has distinct musical lines I've never seen before.
Maybe dubstep is in your line of work? lol
4.5/5
Very nice melody.
Bass can be improved.
Do something better than beats 1 and 2 bass drum hit and beat 2 snare.
Nice "counter-melody" at 1:02.
Deepen this bass dude.
Very repetitive after 1:33.
I stopped listening after 1:55. This song is very repetitive.
Things were cheesy until 0:18 when the bass came in. It gets repetitive, though.
Nice melody at 0:42.
This is one of the better I've seen. Well done.
4/5
The bassline in beginning is cheesy and scale-like. What the heck?
0:24 on is musical, however.
Apparently it ends at 0:44. Work out more of the song please I'd like to hear it.
What bassline?
Ok, not sure what to think of beginning.
Good entrance at 0:18.
Nice 0:27 background noises.
Clarinet noise at 0:30-40 can be more melodic.
0:58 should be expanded.
Nice chords at 1:05, good entrance too.
Missing chord progressions from 1:05 to 1:15 however.
1:36's church-like melody is out of place.
1:50 ?
2:04 I like the background eighth notes.
Nice piano at 2:20. Well done.
2:30 is underdramatized.
2:42 is cheesy lol
2:53 am I listening to a video game song?
3:03 Good.
3:11 Stop changing melodies.
3:17 Are you playing a scale now?
4:04 very musical. Well done. 4:11 on is nice too.
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I feel like you have like 1000 different melodies through this song. Pick a few parts and work those out so they sound good. Broaden the good moments.
Beginning is repetitive.
Still waiting for movement in beginning.
0:52 in and am bored.
I'm at 1:05 now and am totally confused.
Now LAUGHING at 1:23 at the new tones carrying this same BORING melody.
....
1:40 is different!
Ok.... the lower noises were going somewhere, but I feel the others are still being monotonous.
I feel I've wasted 2 minutes. Take this review seriously.
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